Finding complexity when writing technical documents

from blog James' Coffee Blog, | ↗ original
I was recently writing the landing page text for Artemis, the calm feed reader I am developing. In the first three sentences on the page, I wanted to communicate what Artemis is, for what you can use the reader, and the fact that the reader only updates once per day. Here is what I came up with: Artemis is a calm web reader. You can use Artemis...